good framing, flat VO at times, good music, clever story

great lighting in open, good edit, well framed, a little derivative, great art direction, unclear story

very clever, some parts hard to hear

well written, too many credits

nice open, framing, music too epic, physical acting good

good framing, long lens, good racks, good sound mix

good performance by kid, deliberate pacing

good idea, well executed

nice 720

good light, sound but badly mixed, good cam

Cool idea, not executed fully, inside joke-ish

good performance by kid, deliberate pacing

fun concept

sound needs to be much better, needs a stronger finish

needed tight shots, clever credits

more motion in animation, needs better sound,

good framing, flat VO at times, good music, clever story

music too epic, clich

music didn

overproduced credits, no real story

good edit at top

dry performance, rough sound,

good music, no moving visuals, bad integration of security elements

nice 720

nice open, framing, music too epic, physical acting good

too quirky and random

music too epic, fun idea

no clear narrative

harsh light

good light, sound but badly mixed, good cam

clever idea, not well executed

good idea, well executed

don

very clever, some parts hard to hear

clever, needs better VO perf to work,

nice 720 shot, tough to direct kids,

need more cuts

needed shots of dad, no real story

music too epic

random 720 shot, too long for what it is

liked the idea, lighting needed work

good framing, long lens, good racks, good sound mix

nice edit, random story

good acting from the kids (although watch the eye darts), not-so-great from the Dad, decent implementation of the concept

nice open, good framing, nice edit, not much story

lighting rough

interesting concept but wasn’t implemented well, ending was confusing

bad sound, no light

good efx but random

too over the top

great lighting in open, good edit, well framed, a little derivative, great art direction, unclear story

well written, too many credits

VO driven didn

ADR didn

ambiguous story

original music but needed some sync sound

campy, fun, was this already shot?

sync sound fx don

good natural light, too dry, no real story

nice cam animation, unclear story

music too epic, story unclear

liked the guitar guy, random story

clever idea with heart, didn

good sound, needs insert shots, music too epic at times, story too vague

lost all momentum near the end

rough sound, flat acting

well written but wordy, needs music, good acting by girl

VO driven

epic idea without epic production

VO needs work, idea not executed

inconsistent sound

rough editing, needed a better hook

fun concept but not executed

needed sync sound

good open, little kid acts well,

poor VO performance, good heart

rough jumpcuts, odd casting, fun concept

needs sync sound, no clear story

pick 1 font

obnoxious credits, ruff edits, random music

no clear story, random editing

no insert shots, bad sound and FX