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Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft


 
     

Re: Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft

by Michael Traven on Thu Feb 26, 2009 4:37pm

There is a simple word which is uttered far too often in the world of professional cinema.  In fact, it’s uttered too often in life itself.  It’s a horrible word that has several meanings, but I’m only talking about one.

Enough.

Good enough, quick enough, strong enough, dramatic enough, funny enough, exciting enough.  The list goes on, but I think that’s enough.

There’s a simple idea behind this word - enough.  The idea is that what you have just created meets the minimum level of worth required to pass.  This logic is foolish and corporate-esque at best.  There’s a term for this sort of thing.

Base Value Product.

What you are doing when you allow something that is only “good enough” to pass is creating a Base Value Product - that is, you are achieving the lowest value that you can, and accepting that.  There is another word for this.  It’s called mediocrity.  It is the worst plague affecting the Business.

So let’s use the example of screenwriting, since that’s really where a film begins.  You’ve written the first draft.  You like it.  It gets the story across.  It’s good enough.  Stop right there, turn around, bend over I want to kick you.  In fact, I’ll bend over and let you kick me as well, because I do the exact same thing.

I settle.  A major factor of it is laziness.  Writing is not hard work.  Creating is hard work.  And in order to write, you must first create.  You must make choices, which are hard.  You must think hard, dang hard, about how you can perfect this line, how you can cut this scene a little, or add some depth to that scene.  You must be passionate.  Because passion (and therefore activity) is the opposite of laziness.

But let’s take it back a step.  Sit down at your computer (if you’re already there, stand up and then sit down again).  You need a good concept.  You need something that will stand out.  What to do?  Hmm.  I know, how about…

Two teenage boys try to win a skateboard competition, against twenty-something opponents.

It’s not the best, but hey, it’s something.

Stop.  Seriously, please, just stop.  Look at the above sentence (the words that I put in your mouth).  Replace “something” with “good enough.”  And voilà, you’re settling already.  So add to this the fact that you’ll settle for some “good enough” scene, character and dialogue choices, add the fact that you won’t rewrite it, and if you do it will just be skimming it to make sure that everything’s perfect, and now you’ve got utter garbage for a film (not even taking into account the pathetic directorial choices you’ll settle for).

Don’t give me the bologna about how your idea is nothing like that.  It is.  Look at it!  What are you writing?  What is your idea?  Is it original?  Is it personal?  Is it something you need to tell?  Is it something you have to force yourself to keep from blabbering to everyone and their grandmother about?  I’m guessing not.

Why?  Because you settle.

“Well, I just need something to shoot…”  Don’t give me that.  You saying that is about the equivalent of a factory line producing unusable toxic waste and saying they needed to make something.

While I agree that you really should be shooting something, regardless of who you are or what gadgets you have access to, there is one thing that everyone has access to.  Story.  We’ve all got one.  Joe (the guy who hired all the bears to walk around with funny signs telling you to eat at his house) has stories to tell.  Joe’s grandmother even has stories to tell.  But neither Joe nor his grandmother are writers.

Does that mean that everyone knows what it takes to tell a great story?  No.  Can everyone learn?  Probably.  Can you learn?  Definitely.  But it takes one complicatedly simple thing: passion.

But let me tell you, you don’t have to do everything yourself.  If you want to focus entirely on direction or special effects or acting or how cool your camera is, try asking a writer to work on something for you.  But don’t settle for any of his ideas that are “good enough.”  They have to be great.

Because while a lot of films are good enough to make money, and make you rich and famous, very few are truly great.  And it’s the great ones that matter.  All the rest are just… less.

~ Eric M. Boellner

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Re: Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft

by Dallas Lammiman on Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:17pm

Good stuff Eric! Mr. Botkin has a lecture on CD about the top 10 mistakes of beginning film makers. I think most all of those top ten mistakes can be boiled down to the “Good Enough” Syndrome. The lighting is good enough, that last take wasgood enough, how prepared are we to start the project? Good enough. And of corse, is the script good enough yet?

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Re: Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft

by Paul Munger on Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:44pm

Eric, You da man!  smile  What an inspiring post and absolutely nailed it.  We do often settle, but it’s that drive to go one step further which is going to make the difference.  Our journey to our hero’s journey, overcoming obstacle after obstacle, mounting, rising to the challenge, overcoming, only to find ourselves in another hard place!

  We’ve grown lazy.  We’ve grown complacent.  We live in the land of instant everything.  As I’ve been writing feverishly, I come to that blank page, it’s tough, but I know that I must force myself to write, to put words on the page.  I’ve set a goal and a deadline.  It’s exhausting, I go home just wiped out, and come back the next day struggling to get in. 

But boy!  when the ideas come, it’s exhilarating!  And I know over time,  with diligent work and with focused refining, the best will materialize.  Thank you for your encouraging words.  May God give us grace every one, to persevere and whatsoever our hand finds to do, to do it with all our might, “Not with eyeservice, as menpleasers; but as the servants of Christ, doing the will of God from the heart” Eph 6:6

Pressing Onward,
Paul

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Re: Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft

by Michael Traven on Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:52pm

Paul Munger wrote:

We’ve grown lazy.  We’ve grown complacent.  We live in the land of instant everything.  As I’ve been writing feverishly, I come to that blank page, it’s tough, but I know that I must force myself to write, to put words on the page.  I’ve set a goal and a deadline.  It’s exhausting, I go home just wiped out, and come back the next day struggling to get in.

As I post, I’m currently putting off writing another article about procrastination.  wink

So, since you liked the article, I’ll ask your professional advice.  I was considering starting a website (actually started to make one on Google, but being the insecure fool I am, I put four hours into it and then deleted it :| ) to contain all of my random thoughts in the forms of essays/articles on filmmaking.  IYHO, would this be a plausible idea, or should I just post my thoughts on CF.org?  :geek:

P.S.  Thanks for reading, Dallas and Paul!  :mrgreen:

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Re: Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft

by Paul Munger on Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:04pm

Eric Boellner wrote:

I was considering starting a website (actually started to make one on Google, but being the insecure fool I am, I put four hours into it and then deleted it :| ) to contain all of my random thoughts in the forms of essays/articles on filmmaking.  IYHO, would this be a plausible idea, or should I just post my thoughts on CF.org?  :geek:

P.S.  Thanks for reading, Dallas and Paul!  :mrgreen:

Websites and blogs can be a great way to communicate.  I think Kyle has shown us how to do this in a very practical way, offering both information and ideas in a central repository.  So Certainly, yes, this can be an excellent way to stay in touch and build a group of like-minded friends.  I myself have been wanting to do this, but my time is already so tight.  I would say just a two small thing :

1.  Time.  Keeping fresh, interesting concept coming on a regular basis takes time.  It is going to take that passion you talked about earlier. Other people also have tight time, and there is so much out there to read, you would want to make it worth their while to visit.

2.  Money.  It may or may not take much money, not sure, but in addition to a website or blog, you want to make sure that people can find it.  We here at CF will support it and would make time to squeeze in a blog read or what not, but I would suspect that you would possibly like to expand your thoughts and information sharing beyond the limited borders of CF, so that may take a bit more time and money than perhaps anticipated.

Hopefully I will join you in this endeavor, especially as I blog about upcoming productions!  smile

In Christ,
Paul

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Re: Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft

by Michael Traven on Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:30pm

Thanks for the advice, Paul!  :geek:

Right now, I just want the articles to benefit “whosoever will.”  Once I get a job, I may consider a domain name, and other things.

Going to the library to set it up today.  :twisted:

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Re: Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft

by Jordan Smith on Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:33pm

Eric,

I read your post earlier in between chapters of a textbook and didn’t have time to reply then, but now I must say…

Thank you for those excellent thoughts! I know that often I fall into the “good enough” trap and end up having to do more than I wanted, all because I didn’t go the extra mile to begin with.

As to a place where you should post such things beyond CF.org, I highly recommend using WordPress.com instead of Google. Faster, more secure, and better designed, IMHO. (And my dad’s opinion, too. He’s a Web pro, so take it or leave it… :geek: )

Regardless, you really should be posting such things elsewhere in addition to here. There are so many people who need to read that encouragement, and they don’t because they aren’t here.


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Re: Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft

by Michael Traven on Fri Feb 27, 2009 6:32am

Hey Jordan, thanks for recommending WordPress.  It’s much better than Google.  smile

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Re: Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft

by Jordan Smith on Fri Feb 27, 2009 12:46pm

Do you have a site now, then? I’d love to visit it if you do! Please, post a link and add it to your profile.

EDIT: Never mind, saw your other thread. There are problems with email subscription, y’know. wink


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[ Edited: Fri Feb 27, 2009 12:55pm by Jordan Smith ]
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Re: Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft

by Kyle Prohaska on Fri Feb 27, 2009 2:37pm

I posted the post on the Praise Pictures blog.  It’s good stuff my friend, I love it.  If you ever write any articles like that you plan to post let me know.  .(JavaScript must be enabled to view this email address)

I’ll be posting it on the website as an article if you don’t mind (please let me know).  It’ll be included in the newsletter, facebook eblasts, etc.  Any article useful to the reader we’ll take smile

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Re: Less Really Is Less; or How I Learned To Stop Settling and Write the Second Draft

by Michael Traven on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:26pm

Jordan, what email subscription are you talking about?  :| Hehe.  I’m not very web-savvy if you ‘aven’t noticed.  wink

Feel free, Kyle.  I’ve been keeping an eye on your site.  Some great articles there.  smile  :mrgreen:

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